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Post by Caleb Storms on Dec 29, 2017 18:50:58 GMT -6
I posted my first RP for this fed about a week ago and I'd like some feedback on it.
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Post by Henry Saxon on Dec 30, 2017 2:34:09 GMT -6
Feedback is something I myself have purposely stayed away from but I also know its a great tool more so when one first arrives to a new fed so they know how to go about things as they progress. I'm working on a few things that has me tied up for now but give me some time and I will have something up.
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Post by Henry Saxon on Jan 4, 2018 16:44:28 GMT -6
Sorry for the delay.
Okay, so most who tend to give feedback just say..."Good job on the promo". To me, that is not feedback and makes me even wonder if they read the promo.
That said, The promo was spot on as for as length with content. You explained yourself and who you are just enough to make others want to know more. The cross-branding was perfect and needed so that the fans outside of the Nevada area or west coast for that matter will know who you are and how to look for your first match. With Caleb having nothing in Honor as far as storylines go that didn't stop Caleb from being able to address what he is dealing with as he was able to use his current feud with Samuel McPherson.
With a lot of the Honor wrestling currently working for or once worked for SCW it allowed Caleb to easily relate to some here. The fans on the west coast are up to date with Caleb but the east coast may not be so it was a nice touch to speak on that.
I tend to have some pros and cons when I do give feedback as you may recall from the LOW days but in this case, it's hard for me to do just that. A debut promo can work in varies ways and I feel you are spot on if we're looking at it from strictly a grading standpoint.
In the future I know the promo will different and will focus more on what's going on around you in Honor but again with this being your first match in Honor, that was something that is hard to do when you have yet to get your feet wet in the company.
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